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**MJsAnotherPartOfMe** · 01-20-2010, 11:14 PM

I just wrote this a couple of days ago. Popped into my head.

My mind is the disease
Telling me all these things
Things I'm destined to be
Will someone tell me
What's this prisoner to do
To break her chains free
I want to be free

My heart's wearing blinders
Blinded by the pain
Blinded so I can't see
Can't see past the negativity
Tortured soul
Won't you just let me be
Cause all I want
Is to be free

This is short and depressing, so next time I'll try to write something happier, something about bunnies and flowers and sunshine

Sandra Alamo · 01-20-2010, 11:16 PM

Really Nice!

**Lady1Venus** · 01-20-2010, 11:18 PM

It might be a depressing one, but it really holds a lot of emotion. It's really nice

**MJsAnotherPartOfMe** · 01-20-2010, 11:56 PM

lol, thaaaaaanks guys.

Sandra Alamo · 01-20-2010, 11:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MJsAnotherPartOfMe

lol, thaaaaaanks guys.

You're Welcome

**MJsAnotherPartOfMe** · 01-23-2010, 07:19 AM

Maybe it's just me
But it's hard not to see
The world so cynically
We can't love and just disagree
It's right or nothing at all
That ain't how the world should be
With a little more love
An open mind breeds possibilities
But we're all failing miserably
Try to escape from the hate
For who declared this my fate?
Let me set the record straight
All I mean is
There's a universal language
With which we can all relate
The message is simple
But don't follow it blindly
Cause sometimes what feels right
Can be the wrong thing
But loving isn't necessarily agreeing

1. Usually what I write doesn't rhyme, but lately they kind of have. I dunno why; it just comes out.
2. No, I don't really have a style. I don't know really anything about poetry. I just write what's in my head, so there's no use in telling me it's wrong. Just saying.
3. Why are you reading this anyway?

MJRockzMyWhiteSockz · 01-23-2010, 07:55 AM

These are great

Please continue!

janau_4eva · 01-23-2010, 01:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MJRockzMyWhiteSockz

These are great

Please continue!

**MJsAnotherPartOfMe** · 02-07-2010, 07:10 AM

Solace in Solitude

Laughter that fills up the room never left such a void
The love surrounds me is belittling
I'm not alone, so how come all I feel is lonely?
You see my smile
It's the best mask you ever seen
Flesh, blood and pain

Don't even try
It's passed rescuing
The largest crowd can't make this hole complete
Cause it's empty deep inside me.

The heat radiating
But all I feel is cold
On every corner there's a beggar
Solitude in the flesh
How could I be alone
When this man's got no home?

Don't even try
It's passed rescuing
The largest crowd can't make this hole complete
Cause it's empty deep inside me.

Tell me, someone
How do you cure this disease!
Lonely when you're far from alone?
It's selfishness at it's peak!
Ahhh just let me be!

I'm not even going to try and explain
Because it's not like you'd understand anyway
The only solace I've found is in solitude
Solace in solitude
Solace in solitude

If I just stay at home I can't get into trouble
If I just stay at home I can't lose
Even if there's nothing to gain
I consider it a win to just break even.

Cause when I'm alone there's solace
I find peace, I find it in solitude

Blam-O

**Lulu Mercury** · 02-09-2010, 04:37 AM

Wow, that's really neat Alex. "You see my smile
It's the best mask you ever seen
Flesh, blood and pain" That's pretty amazing girrrly!

01-20-2010, 11:14 PM	#1 (permalink)
MJsAnotherPartOfMe MJsAnotherPartOfMe is sharpening her katana. Save MJIFC VIP Silver Donator Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Down There. Posts: 1,136 Blog Entries: 3 My Mood:	Moody I just wrote this a couple of days ago. Popped into my head. My mind is the disease Telling me all these things Things I'm destined to be Will someone tell me What's this prisoner to do To break her chains free I want to be free My heart's wearing blinders Blinded by the pain Blinded so I can't see Can't see past the negativity Tortured soul Won't you just let me be Cause all I want Is to be free This is short and depressing, so next time I'll try to write something happier, something about bunnies and flowers and sunshine __________________ �An artist's only concern is to shoot for some kind of perfection, and on his own terms, not anyone else's.� "Every single person is filled with emotions, but isn't reality more important than subjective notions?" "A civilized society is one which tolerates eccentricity to the point of doubtful sanity."

01-20-2010, 11:16 PM	#2 (permalink)
Sandra Alamo Sandra Alamo is IN LOVE RIGHT NOW! Save Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Rockford,IL. Posts: 3,869 Blog Entries: 9 My Mood:	Really Nice! __________________ I LOVE MICHAEL JACKSON SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ALWAYS WILL BE IN MY DREAMS FOREVER MICHAEL JACKSON ALWAYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

01-20-2010, 11:18 PM	#3 (permalink)
Lady1Venus Lady1Venus is going away for the long weekend Save Angel of a SmoothCriminal Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: New Brunswick, Canada Posts: 7,614 Blog Entries: 6 My Mood:	It might be a depressing one, but it really holds a lot of emotion. It's really nice __________________ My own Michael Jackson forum Remembering Michael Jackson

01-20-2010, 11:56 PM	#4 (permalink)
MJsAnotherPartOfMe MJsAnotherPartOfMe is sharpening her katana. Save MJIFC VIP Silver Donator Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Down There. Posts: 1,136 Blog Entries: 3 My Mood:	lol, thaaaaaanks guys. __________________ �An artist's only concern is to shoot for some kind of perfection, and on his own terms, not anyone else's.� "Every single person is filled with emotions, but isn't reality more important than subjective notions?" "A civilized society is one which tolerates eccentricity to the point of doubtful sanity."

01-23-2010, 07:19 AM	#6 (permalink)
MJsAnotherPartOfMe MJsAnotherPartOfMe is sharpening her katana. Save MJIFC VIP Silver Donator Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Down There. Posts: 1,136 Blog Entries: 3 My Mood:	Maybe it's just me But it's hard not to see The world so cynically We can't love and just disagree It's right or nothing at all That ain't how the world should be With a little more love An open mind breeds possibilities But we're all failing miserably Try to escape from the hate For who declared this my fate? Let me set the record straight All I mean is There's a universal language With which we can all relate The message is simple But don't follow it blindly Cause sometimes what feels right Can be the wrong thing But loving isn't necessarily agreeing 1. Usually what I write doesn't rhyme, but lately they kind of have. I dunno why; it just comes out. 2. No, I don't really have a style. I don't know really anything about poetry. I just write what's in my head, so there's no use in telling me it's wrong. Just saying. 3. Why are you reading this anyway? __________________ �An artist's only concern is to shoot for some kind of perfection, and on his own terms, not anyone else's.� "Every single person is filled with emotions, but isn't reality more important than subjective notions?" "A civilized society is one which tolerates eccentricity to the point of doubtful sanity."

01-23-2010, 07:55 AM	#7 (permalink)
MJRockzMyWhiteSockz MJRockzMyWhiteSockz is Tired and has a stupid headache >.> Save Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Neverland :3 Posts: 1,660 Blog Entries: 10 My Mood:	These are great Please continue! __________________ "On that day, all female officers will be required to wear... tiny miniskirts!" ~Roy Mustang His bloodstained clothes washed up further downstream. We don't know if that means that he's dead, or just naked. ~ Maes Hughes

02-07-2010, 07:10 AM	#9 (permalink)
MJsAnotherPartOfMe MJsAnotherPartOfMe is sharpening her katana. Save MJIFC VIP Silver Donator Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Down There. Posts: 1,136 Blog Entries: 3 My Mood:	Solace in Solitude Laughter that fills up the room never left such a void The love surrounds me is belittling I'm not alone, so how come all I feel is lonely? You see my smile It's the best mask you ever seen Flesh, blood and pain Don't even try It's passed rescuing The largest crowd can't make this hole complete Cause it's empty deep inside me. The heat radiating But all I feel is cold On every corner there's a beggar Solitude in the flesh How could I be alone When this man's got no home? Don't even try It's passed rescuing The largest crowd can't make this hole complete Cause it's empty deep inside me. Tell me, someone How do you cure this disease! Lonely when you're far from alone? It's selfishness at it's peak! Ahhh just let me be! I'm not even going to try and explain Because it's not like you'd understand anyway The only solace I've found is in solitude Solace in solitude Solace in solitude If I just stay at home I can't get into trouble If I just stay at home I can't lose Even if there's nothing to gain I consider it a win to just break even. Cause when I'm alone there's solace I find peace, I find it in solitude Blam-O __________________ �An artist's only concern is to shoot for some kind of perfection, and on his own terms, not anyone else's.� "Every single person is filled with emotions, but isn't reality more important than subjective notions?" "A civilized society is one which tolerates eccentricity to the point of doubtful sanity."

02-09-2010, 04:37 AM	#10 (permalink)
Lulu Mercury Lulu Mercury is needing warmed up Save Jaam's Princess Buttercup Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Earth's Moon in Winter...Never Never Land in Summer. Posts: 4,872 Blog Entries: 6 My Mood:	Wow, that's really neat Alex. "You see my smile It's the best mask you ever seen Flesh, blood and pain" That's pretty amazing girrrly! __________________ The angle an angel lives on only seems invisible until you look closer. In some ways, he did not mind. He would sit above the highest trees and watch the ugly and pretty world he was somehow part of and yet disconnected from.