Moody

[dancebanana99]

I love it me as well I love to write here's one of mine I call it Drowned In Blissful Confusion

A cry of despair is a title only you could grasp for.
It makes me feel as if I'm failing myself again.
At a constant rate, I cannot choose between life or love.
The skies may whither into an oblivion,
But this weight in my heart will always remain.
With every passion, but no will,
And I could never regulate myself enough to press in any deeper.
If you are still devouring a fleshy paint of grey,
Do you force the wrong into pain, as well?
If for once we could succeed,
Would I mean more than a spreading pain that ripples through us?
All because of the things she has said?
We're prayed for, and sinned for,
But what we share remains nothing to be remembered for!
How do you resign without giving it all away?
And how can I decide without needing to penetrate?
I'm floating in envy,
When you only recall what once used to hold perfection.
I'm wondering why you are so light,
And why nothing can seem to harm your system,
When I'm being stabbed, and abused by something that's nonexistent.
Like an empire, you would tower over my seared fingers
As if you were blind to the flames that consume me.
If I keep skinning these soft screams into a tighter sensation,
Then I will soon see your intimate cravings.
But the complexity of your love is reigned by my own deity.
Will you ever attain "just how I've fallen"?
I can't breathe, but I don't feel as if I'm suffocating.
They must know who I am today,
But I am still curious as to who that could be!
I fear that your desire is just set to be a lie,
So can I love this all the same?
If I could fulfill the desire to bleed the same way you do,
Could your warmth ever continue;
Could we ever be the same?

[Lulu Mercury]

Originally Posted by MJsAnotherPartOfMe

Maybe it's just me
But it's hard not to see
The world so cynically
We can't love and just disagree
It's right or nothing at all
That ain't how the world should be
With a little more love
An open mind breeds possibilities
But we're all failing miserably
Try to escape from the hate
For who declared this my fate?
Let me set the record straight
All I mean is
There's a universal language
With which we can all relate
The message is simple
But don't follow it blindly
Cause sometimes what feels right
Can be the wrong thing
But loving isn't necessarily agreeing

1. Usually what I write doesn't rhyme, but lately they kind of have. I dunno why; it just comes out.
2. No, I don't really have a style. I don't know really anything about poetry. I just write what's in my head, so there's no use in telling me it's wrong. Just saying.
3. Why are you reading this anyway?

3. Oh, because I'm intrigued.

Really good! there's a universal language, that we an all relate to, the things that bind and bridge us together...and exactly right, you don't have to agree with one single thing with them, just to love them. I know and so sad really that it is either agree, or nothing. One's own opinion thrust into the spotlight in the case of, it's my way or the highway, when in reality disagreeing is just different coloured outlooks puzzling the painting together. Awesome poems

[MJsAnotherPartOfMe]

Originally Posted by Lulu Mercury

3. Oh, because I'm intrigued.

Really good! there's a universal language, that we an all relate to, the things that bind and bridge us together...and exactly right, you don't have to agree with one single thing with them, just to love them. I know and so sad really that it is either agree, or nothing. One's own opinion thrust into the spotlight in the case of, it's my way or the highway, when in reality disagreeing is just different coloured outlooks puzzling the painting together. Awesome poems

Thanks Laura! See somebody gets what I was trying to write...

I think I talked to you about my writings before. I said I never post them...ever. Finally I just decided to post some random ones, so even if it's just a couple people, I'm glad y'all enjoy them. Thank you SO MUCH

[MJsAnotherPartOfMe]

Originally Posted by dancebanana99

I love it me as well I love to write here's one of mine I call it Drowned In Blissful Confusion

See yours was brilliant. You're a writer. Me, I just have random **** pop into my head and see if it makes sense. Post more This could be a little thread of poems and random ramblings. Go for it!

[dancebanana99]

alright well here's another one


Last Time

If this was the last time I'd
Ever hear your voice, I would
Sit with you and talk with you
Until your voice is embedded in
My head,if this was the last time
I'd would ever hear you laugh I'd
I would tell you every joke in the
Book just to see you tear with
Laughter,if this was the last time
I'd ever see you smile,I would seize
Every chance i get to take a picture
So i could never forget your smile
If this was the last time I'd ever
Hold you in my arms and would stop
You in your tracks and embrace you
For hours,if this was the last time
I'd ever say I LOVE YOU,I'd tell you
As the hours on the clock change,If
This should be our last time,I would
Do everything to make if the best

[dancebanana99]

I look into your eyes,
but see nothing there.
What happened to the love,
that we use to share?
I reach out for your hand,
and it feels so cold.
What happened to the warmth,
that it use to hold.
I never thought a love,
like ours would ever die.
I never thought you,
could ever make me cry.
It use to be so special,
like a dream come true.
You were the one for me,
and I was the one for you.
Now things have changed,
we've fallen apart.
You're not the same person,
that once touched my heart.
Don't say you need time,
cause time is all we had.
I'm tired of being hurt,
and feeling so sad.
There's nothing left to do,
but go our own way.
The question of "what happened"
will be answered some day.

[MJsAnotherPartOfMe]

Everyone in your life is in it because they want something - because they get something out of being in your life. Some people want things from you such as: fame, money, sex, attention, to get back at someone else, because you make them feel good, drugs, popularity, whatever. Then there are other people who only want the simplest, purest, most intimate, profound thing you could give another person: to love you and to be loved back. That's what I want. I love you. I want to be loved too. But no matter what you want from a person, it's all the same; we're all the same. Once they can't get from you what they want, or they can't get it the way they want it, they leave. They're done with you, and it's on to the next person who will give them their hearts desire, just the way they want it. Moral: love doesn't keep us together. Nothing keeps us together, because no one will ever really stay together. No one's ever really satisfied, therefore no one's ever truly complacent.

Enjoy the people in your lives, folks. Because if they don't leave you of their choice, then they're just gonna die. Don't take advantage of any relationship, no matter how long or short it may be.