It's fine. But I really didn't like how they commented over that fan fiction even when you mentioned there is gay content.
On the bright side, I love your new story. And, yes... I did only read a bit, admitting my little sin staying away from great pieces of writing by writers like yourself :]
Have you read my fan fiction? I have two, but I don't want to go on with one of them.
It's called Remember The Time.
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